This is very well done mainly due to your sense of 'balance'.
The image is well proportioned and even which makes it very
clean cut. Ok to the pros and cons.
Pros: Your image is very simple yet
very effective. The simple folds on the characters clothes
are well placed, the colouring is well done but maybe
add some more definition to your shading so you have a
light source, and putting texture into it is a great idea.
As i have previously said you have a great sense of balance
everything is in the right places. The expressions are
also very defined.
Cons: You should try and work on the
straightness of the lines, even the best of us have our
shakey days but a nice smooth line arts can make a picture
look more proffesional, also while i'm on the topic of
line art try and add more thicker/thiner lines in areas
to amplify certain attributes (clothes folds, hair ect..)
This image is fantastic and i'm looking forward in seeing
more of your
work.
=D
~Demon Angelina